Rawl's Tablet

[Nergal]

Rawl's Tablet (First part)

Do you want to found the Paradise? Probably, yes.

Matt Vorhanden is a Ancient History teacher in a University. You have to guide him to the Rawl's Tablet which contains the location of the Dilmun. The Dilmun was the Paradise of the ancient sumerians. The only document that relate the history and the location of the Dilmun is a clay tablet discovered by a archeologist called Martin Rawls.

If you found this tablet, you have finished the first part of the adventure.

Characteristics:

640x480 resolution
32 bit colour

At this moment, 14 rooms are available.

Global progress: 60%
Graphics: 55%
Music and sound: 75%
Puzzles: 70%

The game is in spanish but in the future could be availabe in english.

Demo will be avaliable soon.

Screenshots:







PD: sorry for my bad english!

[Jon]

This looks like a nice small game, good luck!

[Nergal]

Thanks for your answer! 

The game will be divided in two parts. The first is the "Raw's tablet" and the second is the search of the Dilmun.

I admit that the graphics aren't goods but I like make this game!

[CosmoQueen]

I love muli-part games! Can't wait to play it.

[Nergal]

Demo version is now available.

Download here:

http://www.xzshare.it/346442

It's a short demo in spanish. If you find any problem you can tell me.

I'm working in a english version.

Enjoy the demo and critic the game if it is necessary!

Thanks!

[ciborium]

PLEASE! 
Make sure you have someone whose first language is English do the translation.

There is nothing worse than trying to follow clues with the word order incorrect.  Well, other than trying to correlate two words that might sound similar in Spanish, but are very different in English.

Spanish: !Hace frio!
Spanglish: It makes cold!
English: It is cold!

Spanish: Mira la ventana blanca.
Spanglish: Look at the window white.
English: Look at the white window.

[Nergal]

Ok ciborium.

Thanks for your answer!

[Nergal]

I need some help with the translation. If I do a full translation (demo version) I'll need a revision. If somebody is interested in this, tell me please.

Thanks!

[ciborium]

I need some help with the translation. If I do a full translation (demo version) I'll need a revision. If somebody is interested in this, tell me please.

Thanks!

I have contacted Nergal about translating, or at least correcting his translation.

[Cinfa]

I like the screenshots and wow.. 14 rooms? It's a huge work! Or at least it would be to me...
I'm downloading the demo now, and I can offer help with italian translation if you're interested, just pm me.

EDIT:
Ok, I tried the game till the end. I had an unknown inventory number error (the yoyo, I used the wire with the wooden round, but if I use the wooden peg on wire it works).
It's nice, but the speed of the character is a bit slow IMHO.
I know that maybe you already know, but if you keep on interacting with the vending machine's hole it will keep giving you a coin, and you can get everytime a chocolate.
I'm waiting for a longer demo! Good work!

[Nergal]

Thanks for your opinion, Cinfa! I'm very happy because there're people who tries my game! Thanks for ciborium, too. He is helping me with the english translation.

In the future, I might need your help, Cinfa. Thanks again.

I will try to solve all the problems that you comment to me.

Thanks!

[Nergal]

I add two new screenshots of the full version:

[Jon]

This looks very good, a nice, basic AGS game.
I can't wait for this to finish!